Our Philippine Government should not only focus and rely to the remittances abroad from our so
called heroes of the Philippines, the Overseas Filipino Workers (OFW). Just to boost our economy
status and to raise peso against dollar. If our Government will take a second look, we have a lot of
revenues and resources. First is we invite foreign investors to put up and invest business here in
our country, and developed tourists spots to encourage tourists to come and visit our place and for
them to witness the wonders of the Philippines. Furthermore it helps the employment of our fellow Filipinos.
Some of your statements are good.
TumugonBurahinPlease arrange the alignment of the sentences on your blog.
You failed to include some impacts of the issue on you. For example, you might want to consider answering: Are you happy about this positive news? If you had parents working abroad, would you want them to come back to the Philippines or just stay there to continue working?..etc.
Thanks for submitting before the deadline. Keep it up!
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